Got carried away with myself, did I?
The last two days I wrote some long posts.
But they weren't long, were they?
They were just bunched up.
I've gone back and edited them so each sentence is a paragraph.
I can't tell if I'm smartening it up or dumbing it down.
But I imagined it was bugging you.
Which may have meant it was bugging me.
So, tell me what you think.
See the revised posts from yesterday and the day before:
- Get the new Amsterdam, part 1
- Get the new Amsterdam, part 2